In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to

use

animals

for

food

or

use

animal

products

,

for instance

, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In today’s modern society thanks to the advancement in technology. There are more and more methods to produce

food

or other

products

without using

animals

, especially wild

animals

. In my opinion, I believe that there is no need of using

animals

for

food

or manufacture

products

. The

first

argument given to support my opinion is that there is a great evolution of many aspects of society. People are gradually aware of

benefits

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the benefits

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of eating vegetables. We should follow some nutrition experts advice that eats more vegetables and reduces meats that

provides

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more

nutrious

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nutritious

nutrients

for our health .

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, most of us want to have good looking with

a

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apply

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slim body that the reason why people like to eat

vegetable

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vegetables

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and fruits than

meats

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meat

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. In manufacturing,

with

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apply

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the

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advanced technology allow us to produce many goods

such

as clothes,

shoses

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shoes

, medicines and so on without using

materials

from

nanimals

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animals

. We can

use

natural

material

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materials

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like wool or man-made

materials

like cotton,

sylicon

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silicon

and so on. Another reason for using other

materials

which

is

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are

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alternative for

animals

that to protect the

inviroment

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environment

and help

animals

. In conclusion, I entirely agree that there is no need of using

manimals

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animals

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for

food

or other

products

. We completely can

use

annother

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another

things like vegetables or many other

materials

to alter

animals

in

manufacture

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the manufacture

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and consume

food

.