Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as learning tool, which is why children are less educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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deal of
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by analyzing why the
book
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hours of
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platform
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book
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information and quiet
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monotonous
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place and read as slowly as their wish. If they don't understand it is easy in
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it is more problematic
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chapter or
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from
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what can be achieved. Many monitoring series of
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are included in
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because
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a chance to
practice
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of words can not be learned only
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.
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memory to preserve for
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time
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book
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is
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effective tool of learning than digital technology. In conclusion, despite many informational classes delivered digitally can
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it can not observe
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student
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students
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and make sure whether the
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understood or not.
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,
book
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courses
of instructions, clear curriculum and
practice
material that ensures students are fully learned.
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,
digital
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medium
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of learning can not replace paper format.
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