With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things.

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is not a thing that can be done away with. It is the observation and study of the world around us. The Scientific method is just observing and studying in a way that minimizes bias and error. I suppose you could abolish the Scientific Method if you really tried, but as long as people are asking
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and trying to understand the nature around them, as long as someone is curious or asks why something is the way it is,
science
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is the inevitable
result
of asking questions about the world. Just by asking
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question, you have kicked off
science
.
Science
is the
result
of curiosity, and I don’t know that you could argue that we don’t need to be curious. Certainly, life would be boring without it.
Thus
, human being keeps evolving by asking questions . The journey has been long, Cave Man learnt various skills and techniques to survive and become self-sufficient . Humans kept discovering and creating which led to Industrial Revolution . The
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we are in Cyber Age . Life is harsh , but with the help
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modern
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man has conquered many frontiers.
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has become a part of our lives and without
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we risk extinction ,human
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need to develop positively and during our century it is only possible with
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of the questions about the world around us.
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