planting trees is very important for the environment .some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns while other believes housing facilities should be built instead do you agree or disagree?

In these modern times, it is a known fact that majority of the

people

and concerned about the

environment

, and the adverse impact it can have on our health. Whilst many

people

agree that more

trees

should be planted in the

cities

, there are

also

people

who believe more

houses

should be built in the

cities

. I totally agree that the vacant spaces should be utilised for planting

trees

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with the overpopulation of

cities

, it is important to build

houses

in order to satisfy the demand.

This

is the main reason for

people

to argue for increasing the building of

houses

.

For example

, the population in Mumbai is increasing rapidly with many

people

from the rural areas, moving into the

cities

for better opportunities resulting in a problem, as there is not enough space to accommodate everyone. Thereby, the city is forced to build more dwellings for

people

.

Such

activity has detrimental effects on the

environment

, which in turn affects our health. Alternately,

people

argue that it is more important to clean the air in many major

cities

and

this

can be done by the growing of

trees

. Even though our

cities

require more condos to be built, we cannot deny the importance of

trees

and the role they play in improving our

environment

and air quality. An example of

this

can be seen in New Delhi. New Delhi, is known to be one of the most polluted

cities

in the world and every year during the “smog season”, many local residents lose their lives because of respiratory problems.

To conclude

, the building of

houses

is important to meet the demand of occupants migrating to the major

cities

but we cannot deny the effect

this

is causing the

environment

. In my

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the population should focus on the planting of more

trees

so as to alleviate the surrounding conditions and to improve the air quality.