Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Some
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love games that involve life-threatening risks like sky diving and skiing are too risky and the cost of a mishap in
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event is a ruined career or death. Some
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argue that these sports activities should be restricted. I partially agree with
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statement as it poses some serious life-threatening risks.
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, there are several professionals for whom these events are only a livelihood. Activities like sky diving and skiing are not only performed for fun but
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for military exercises, conveyance, goods delivery and other needs. Owing to these needs, banning the sport could cause an adverse impact on a certain population and violate their traditional ways.
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,
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in polar regions need to practice skiing in order to survive
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extreme conditions and perform their daily activities. So, we need to have certain clauses for these
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before forbidding sports.
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, these events can be prohibited for those that just play them for fun as it costs the life of a person or his career due to a small mishap. Mishaps like
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cause severe bone fractures and often turn out to be fatal. One clear example to support the argument is, the recent study on accidents caused due to hazardous sports, where, it was noted that one in 300 visitors met with an accident and 95% of the accidents are met by unprofessional.
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,
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that do not have decent experience and a reason should be banned for
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risky sport. To conclude, Games like skiing and sky diving involves life-threatening risk and should be banned for visitors, particularly, for
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that have no valid experience.
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, there should be no restrictions to native
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for whom these events are mere livelihood.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adrenaline rush
  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
  • legal implications
  • peer pressure effects
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