Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While it is thought that
adolescents
ought to focus on a broad range of school subjects
,others feel it would be better for them to concentrate only on chosen subjects
. I believe the number of subjects
they study should depend on their age
.
One reason adolescents
from around the age
of 13 to 18 ought to focus on learning as many different subjects
as possible is
that they are too immature to make serious decisions that will affect their future. By studying various Change the verb form
are
subjects
, they will develop a clearer understanding of their skills and interests, which often change as a child ages. Secondly
, teenagers need to vary what they learn to helpthem
develop into Correct your spelling
help them
well rounded
adults. Add a hyphen
well-rounded
For example
, they need sport to encourage health, they need Maths to be able to perform simple arithmetic in life, and they need languages to help them learn communication. At a young age
they are not mature enough to be responsible for their own development.
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,age
However
, by the age
of 18, adolescents
know not only what subjects
they most enjoy or excel at, but also
which subjects
are most useful for their future prospects in life. For this
reason, the majority of university applicants are 18 years old, and they are eager to engage more deeply in specific
subject matter. Add an article
the specific
Furthermore
, their ability to concentrate on one specific subject and study in depth
is fully established at that Add a hyphen
in-depth
age
, unlike when they were younger. Lastly
, older adolescents
have the ability to manage their own schedule and can take responsibility for continuing art or sport as hobbies.
To conclude, younger teenagers are not ready to specialize and require a broad framework of subjects
to help them develop, but at the age
of 18, this
is no longer the case.Submitted by Emmanuelodachi on
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