You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him/her your other news

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Dear Sam,

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writing to let you know that I changed my job and

I’m

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excited about my new occupation. I was really fed up with my old position because I felt that I wasn’t learning new tricks. You know me well; If I don’t have any challenges to surpass, I feel demotivated. Apart from that, I was very unhappy with my old manager’s

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. He was totally rude and I always felt under pressure from him.

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working as a marketing manager in my family company now, and

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new position fits me like a glove.

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, I can use all my creativity, developing advertising campaigns, and I will be responsible for training the sales team monthly. I

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have special news for you.

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getting married to Mike within 2 months and we will be really happy to share

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moment with you. Make sure you keep the

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weekend in December free, so you can come and celebrate with us. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Mary.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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