Large business has big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

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In recent times, a big portion of each company's budget has been invested in marketing and promotion.

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has certainly been beneficial for larger activities, whose sales have increased dramatically.

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, there are problems that are caused by

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monopoly of big businesses, and I'm going to discuss them in

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essay, as well as ways to solve them. One of the biggest issues caused by marketing procedures is that local shops are being overshadowed by larger shops. In fact, to be able to advertise your products on social media as well as billboards,

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, you have to invest large sums of money on promotion, and local activities definitely cannot do that.

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, it's clear that most people, especially teens, are going to buy brands that are hugely known,

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of others that are smaller and less known.

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, in the

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few years, websites for clothes

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as Shein have become really popular thanks to their marketing strategies, and nobody can really compete with them now that everybody knows who they are. On the other side, small businesses should be helped and people should be encouraged to buy from them. To do so, there should be discounts or events that could attract more people, because right now most adults really value the cost of what they are buying. Especially because of the pandemic, lots of stores have suffered economically, but others have suffered as well, so discounts could be helpful.

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, in my town around Christmas, there was

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huge event, and if you bought something from small stores, you had the opportunity to win a prize, and I think that's a wonderful idea. In conclusion, surely right now we are encouraged to buy from big chains, whose products are highly advertised,

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small stores' sales have decreased because of it so there should be events and discounts that could help them gain new clients.

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Large business has big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Your opinion

You recently bought some train for a jorney a week in advance. When you went to the station to cathch the train, you were told you not use the tickets and the staff were unhelpful to you.

People argue that children spend their leisure time differently than it was before, and the main reason fir this is new devises.

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweigh the diadvantages ?

Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

Zoos are inhumane and should be abolished. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?