With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. what are the advantages and the disadvantages of doing this.

In recent days , the population has been increasing tremendously .

Therefore

,some people vocalize that the necessity of manufacturing genetically modified food.

This

essay will discuss the pros and cons of

this

scenario in the forthcoming paragraphs. On the one hand,there are plenty of merits to produce

GM

foods

.

Firstly

,in

this

modern era

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individuals prefer white-collar jobs rather than cultivation so

that

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manufacturing of

Gm

will help to reduce the shortage of

foods

.Many of youngsters are graduated so they are not interested to work in nature they should focus the career which gives more opportunities;

however

foods

are inevitable because of that

gm

food has pivotal .

For example

, few years before

india

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has prohibited

gm

foods

but

government

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the government

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has given approval to many

gm

foods

.

secondly

,the majority of

gm

foods

are healthier and cheaper .it has been

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of many nutrients and vitamins

although

grown with

less

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pesticides. To prove that,a survey has

conducted

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one of the cities,which shows individuals are bought

gm

foods

to gain nutrients.

On the other hand

,due to various

reasons

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gm

foods

have demerits. Some people have affected allergenic

problem

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while using

gm

foods

because

their

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altered DNA and

consequences

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the consequences

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of manufacturing processes. For evidence,one of my friends was hospitalized after had

gm

foods

.she has got allergenic issues after the consumption. To conclude,

gm

foods

have many advantages and disadvantages;

however

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the

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effective manufacturing process will reduce the drawbacks.

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expecting

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that people will depend

more

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the

gm

foods

in future because

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it's

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advantages.