In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to politics. In several nations,

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not participate in a vote. In

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issues

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and suggest possible solutions to alleviate

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. There are several reasons why the younger people have less time to elect.

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not have to take care of

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politics.

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society is peaceful.

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, if the country is likely to occur a war or strike, civilians must watch their country’s

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through TV or newspaper.

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discipline for elder people. A number of countries,

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have a population of few younger people problem. As for

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elected person implies the new rules shush as increasing pension and supporting daycare house for the old generation. A possible solution to these matters would be two ideas.

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with, the government use an advertisement

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SNS. Younger ones always look at

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.

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, Instagram, Youtube and Facebook.

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with

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Youtuber who makes youtube video on the internet. It is

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effect

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viewers and they know when we should go vote.

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, the candidates have to make a policy not only older but

also

younger.

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, they provide

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free education system until

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university. To sum up, there are some causes that they do not interested in local

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and candidates encourage

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ideas for

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. Whereas

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the administration utilizes social network services and the

vote

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person imposes the new suggestion for

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the youth

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generation, these explanations might deal with these problems.