A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . suggest an interesting parts of the city to live in . describe the public transport in your city . say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear David, It is exciting news for me, you will be moving to Melbourne for your work and congratulation to my buddy. Melbourne is a beautiful city in Australia. You are very lucky to move here because you could see a lot of interesting locations

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as the national gallery of Victoria is an International art museum, Queen victoria market. These are the most popular and interesting locations in

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city. We could be seen when we arrive here. Probably your work in a city centre, you can take the public transport here

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as bus and metro train. If you will get an Oyster card, you will not buy tickets, again and again, to travel on public transport. Early morning and evening time traffic is a peak on the road. Certainly, I will introduce my friends to you and you will make friends at your workplace too. I am really waiting for your arrival, if you do not mind, you will come as fast as possible. Anyway, I cannot wait to see you. Lots of love, Luna.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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