Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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International
events
nowadays challenge the ability of the
host
country
who have to prepare for those
events
. While there are those
people
who believe that it is a waste of
money
, some
people
argue that it would bring profits to the
country
. The following paragraph will be discussing both views.
However
, in my opinion, the
host
country
will gain many advantages impact from these
events
.
To begin
with, I believe that almost every
country
want to be a
host
because it is a great chance that they can introduce themself to the planet. In 1998,
for example
, it was arguably one of the best
world
cups,
also
known as France 98, that it had ever happened
although
I have never seen that before, I still have heard about that
football
event
until
this
day. Having said that, even though the
football
event
was ended already, it still be in a topic nowadays if we are talking about one of the best
football
events
in the
world
.
This
instance bolstered the idea that good sporting
events
like the
world
cup will ong live in
people
memory forever despite the
event
had ended.
However
, there are some sporting
events
that were regarded as a failure. In 2010, South Africa had introduced itself as a
host
that prepares one of the biggest sporting
events
in the
world
like the
world
cup. After the
event
, it was considered a waste of
money
because they can not gain any benefit from a
football
stadium. They built those stadiums just for the
world
cup,
then
they abandoned it. There are some reports about the opinion's population who is a resident in South Africa.They said it was a waste of
money
and they that amount of
money
can bring a lot of good impact to the
country
.
Therefore
,
this
is a negative impact on a
country
that they are no longer receive any benefit from it.
Lastly
, to tell you whether it is good or bad to be a
host
, it is about how they can gain some profit after the
events
had ended or not. I believe that to be a
host
could provide advantages to the
country
because they can show how well they can manage
people
who come from all over the place or in about tourism.
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