The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?
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to bio-diversity loss and the Correct your spelling
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extinction
of animals life. This
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misunderstanding
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a misunderstanding
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such
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in rare species such
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any
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forms
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the causes
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