The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?

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we can not refuse that
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took a major role
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destroying
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ecosystem which
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to bio-diversity loss and the
extinction
of animals life.
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essay believes the main problem is
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the misconception
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of how
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nature
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by
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and give a lesson to
those little human
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might be the most viable
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. The reasons why the human become a downside of natural plants and animals is
misunderstanding
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of food chain conception that people are the most significant part of it. They forced their power to control those innocent living lives. Many harmful acts
such
as hunting or take a reserved animal as a pet,
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greater
extinction
.
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, the illegal hunting tradition in
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area
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especially in the North-East
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area of Thailand among the wealth.
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operation caused a harmful
extinction
in rare species
such
as
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panther
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and white
tiger
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. The prime solution is to set a correct perspective of human position in
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chain and natural ecosystem. The youngs should be more educated about how important
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bio-diversity is and the
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affect
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of
species's
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loss. The best place and the easiest method to rise up children's awareness is
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through the zoo.
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, in some
countries
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they open the zoo up for free to young generation learners
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. There are plenty of interesting
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provided in
many
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form
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such
as educational boards or realistic models. In conclusion, the larger expansion of
extinction
in certain species life that affected by world's citizen is
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issue until these days. The way that
human
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loosing
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control to protect other wild lives might be one of
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while the main solution might be adding a precise attitude about nature
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the
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young age.
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