The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?

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we can not refuse that

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took a major role

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destroying

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ecosystem which

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to bio-diversity loss and the

extinction

of animals life.

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the misconception

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of how

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nature

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by

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and give a lesson to

those little human

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might be the most viable

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. The reasons why the human become a downside of natural plants and animals is

misunderstanding

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a misunderstanding

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of food chain conception that people are the most significant part of it. They forced their power to control those innocent living lives. Many harmful acts

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as hunting or take a reserved animal as a pet,

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greater

extinction

.

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especially in the North-East

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area of Thailand among the wealth.

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operation caused a harmful

extinction

in rare species

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as

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panther

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and white

tiger

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. The prime solution is to set a correct perspective of human position in

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chain and natural ecosystem. The youngs should be more educated about how important

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bio-diversity is and the

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affect

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of

species's

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loss. The best place and the easiest method to rise up children's awareness is

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through the zoo.

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, in some

countries

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they open the zoo up for free to young generation learners

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. There are plenty of interesting

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provided in

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form

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such

as educational boards or realistic models. In conclusion, the larger expansion of

extinction

in certain species life that affected by world's citizen is

never ending

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issue until these days. The way that

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loosing

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control to protect other wild lives might be one of

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while the main solution might be adding a precise attitude about nature

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young age.