People hold differing views about whether the government should invest in
sport
and
art
at school
instead
of those of society. While some people believe
this
policy could exert numerous benefits, I strongly endorse the
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that investment in communal
events
could bear greater merits and should be taken into great consideration.
On the one hand, it is reckoned that residents could reap some advantages when the authority should support mainly in
sport
and
art
lessons at school. There is no doubt that if children are intensively educated about
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and
art
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academic knowledge in the official learning scheme,
although
they are presumably put under enormous pressure, they can broaden their horizon and practice aesthetic skills,
then
becoming rounded as a person.
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argument, students following
such
educational program are supposed to make
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effort and take advantage of almost time to master in every field, which unquestionably means that they probably do not have time to relax or develop their personal majors and eventually, end up with being exhausted.
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process, immensely investing in
such
areas in education is likely to require a huge amount of state coffer, leading to the lack of revenue to subsidize other crucial parts, namely health care, traffic.
Therefore
, I significantly hold the conviction that the authority should pour money into enhancing professional
sport
and
art
events
for a myriad of merits.
Firstly
, when the state concentrates on training and investing in a particular kind of
sport
or
art
, the possibility of having top athletes and artists in
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is relatively high, which could put the national image on the map in
such
fields.
This
can be illustrated by the fact that thanks to having a convention of educating archery, Korea has had strong a reputation for having
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worldwide athletes in
this
field and consistently ranks
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top position all over the world.
Furthermore
, investing in social
events
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national economy with a considerable amount of revenue when they allegedly attract tourism, encouraging the transportation and services co-increase.
To conclude, it is my belief that
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at school, which seemingly trigger some adverse drawbacks, the government should focus more on social
sport
and
art
events
.