Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The

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industry actively increasing and rivalry between rest places makes

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cheaper and available for the majority of

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class. Today many

people

visiting foreign countries for pleasure and have a good rest. But, some

people

think that

this

travel

has a negative effect

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the countries

traveled

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to. I disagree with

this

point and

In addition

, it is easier to

travel

.

Travel

doesn't always have to cost millions of dollars. Nowadays,

people

have the opportunity to go to places with cheap accommodation. It

also

helps in forming meaningful links. The

people

they meet while

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can be their most important contacts.

Travel

can introduce an individual to a wide variety of lifestyles and cultures.

In addition

, the benefit of

tourists

spending foreign money in the country will greatly boost the economy. But,

tourists

actually prefer to have good holidays and do not think about

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harm to the nature and environment. They don’t clean up trash after themselves and behave inappropriately towards local rules and traditions.

For example

,

tourists

attending the national parks of Canada every year leave

thousands

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kilograms of trash. It becomes a cause of disease of local animals. After all, wild animals that have sat down on

this

garbage suffer from problems with peeling and some non-digestible types of waste

such

as plastic become the cause of their death. The tourism industry plays a significant role in the country’s economic development. It helps in creating employment opportunities for

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large number of

people

, but the type of

tourists

described earlier causes the greatest damage to

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countries. Not all holidaymakers are like that, and responsible

people

respect local customs

people

who take care of the environment and their majority, In conclusion, there are numerous benefits of international

travel

which cannot be overlooked and overweight the cons.