Some people say the main environmental problem of our time is the lose of a particular species of plants and animals. Others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Considering recent environmental issues, some people believe it is

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a

result

of

extinction

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the extinction

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of various plants and animals . Whereas , others are of the view that there are more essential factors contributing to natures

problems

. I will discuss both views and

also

give my opinion in

this

essay . 

Firstly

, on one hand , most individuals feel the global changes in our surroundings is due to the fact that some species of

vegetations

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and mammals are no more existing.

Hence

changes in terms of deforestation which is due to

trees

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uprooting and lack of cultivation of plants

consequently

leads

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to

errosions

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erosions

erosion

which could

further

result

in natural disasters.

For instance

, a study carried out by John Walker a geologist in 1990 showed that one of the major causes of desertification in

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part of Africa was as a consequence of uprooting trees . In regards to the reasons given above it

is consider

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that environmental

problems

faced in Modern days could own to disappearance in some kind of plants and animals.

However

,

on the other

hand

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a good majority think that the crisis happening in our natural habitant is

as a

result

of

man made

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problems

. Following the current health challenges

face

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by humans, it can be drawn to

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conclusions

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that most of these illnesses are caused by air pollution which is due to carbon monoxide released in the atmosphere by vehicles and industries.

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example

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a survey was carried out and the

result

gotten

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proved that people residing in

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overcrowded

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over crowded

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overcrowded

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cities were prone to having respiratory illnesses.

Although

a good number of factors are involved in environmental

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Hazard

pollution by people play a major role. In conclusion, in my perspective both sides of

this

argument have their merits ,

nevertheless

am of the view that artificial global warming is the most pronounced cause of environmental

problems

.

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I recommend Government should enlighten

nation

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on ecological preservation.