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Some people say the main environmental problem of our time is the lose of a particular species of plants and animals. Others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Considering recent environmental issues, some people believe it is
as
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a
result
 of
extinction
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the extinction
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 of various plants and animals . Whereas , others are of the view that there are more essential factors contributing to natures
problems
. I will discuss both views and
also
 give my opinion in
this
 essay . 
Firstly
, on one hand , most individuals feel the global changes in our surroundings is due to the fact that some species of
vegetations
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 and mammals are no more existing.
Hence
 changes in terms of deforestation which is due to
trees
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tree
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 uprooting and lack of cultivation of plants
consequently
leads
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 to
errosions
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erosions
erosion
 which could
further
result
 in natural disasters.
For instance
, a study carried out by John Walker a geologist in 1990 showed that one of the major causes of desertification in
Northern
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 part of Africa was as a consequence of uprooting trees . In regards to the reasons given above it
is consider
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 that environmental
problems
 faced in Modern days could own to disappearance in some kind of plants and animals.
However
,
on the other
hand
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 a good majority think that the crisis happening in our natural habitant is
as a
result
 of
man made
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problems
. Following the current health challenges
face
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 by humans, it can be drawn to
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the conclusions
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conclusions
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 that most of these illnesses are caused by air pollution which is due to carbon monoxide released in the atmosphere by vehicles and industries.
For
example
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 a survey was carried out and the
result
gotten
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 proved that people residing in
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overcrowded
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over crowded
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overcrowded
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 cities were prone to having respiratory illnesses.
Although
 a good number of factors are involved in environmental
Harzard
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Hazard
 pollution by people play a major role. In conclusion, in my perspective both sides of
this
 argument have their merits ,
nevertheless
 am of the view that artificial global warming is the most pronounced cause of environmental
problems
.
In
addition
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 I recommend Government should enlighten
nation
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the nation
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 on ecological preservation.
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