You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it
Hello sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding that my items were missing from the box which your company has couriered at my home.The product which is missing is a brand new canon camera with 4000 pixels resolution with a black coloured body . It’s an expensive item which costs me about 500 dollars.I purchased it from a local electronics shop in London city.I am also
having its invoice receipt.
To begin
with,My luggage weight was more so I decided to courier some of the items to my home and at the ,
airport there was a counter by your company for shipping parcels . So ,I made a booking over there for my products to be delivered and even the executive made the list of products in the box.Remove the comma
apply
Then
,he gave me a receipt.
In my opinion, he must have jumbled the belongings with some other courier as at that time he was also
booking one more courier for the US and simultaneously he was talking on the phone. I my viewpoint ,your company should check the couriers placed during that time,if the products are delivered to some other person it could be sorted out.
Hope I will hear from your side soon if any further
progress is made.
Yours faithfully,
Jagjot
.Correct your spelling
Jagjit
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite