Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The ecosystem bears and graces both living and non-living organisms equally with no discrimination on grounds of wealth,

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and race. The live spirits in the bushes and dense, big forests are intact because of the

animals

which

does

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not disrupt

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harmony and peace. Over the decades, humans have been vicious and cruel towards

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other living creatures. during the long winters, humans warmed themselves by butchering the

thicker skinned

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animals

of the north poles. They made fancy carpets, shrugs and coats by peeling off skin from wild cats of the forest and reptiles lingering on the lands. The trunks of elephants, horns of rhinos were exported in exchange

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wealth and prosperity. Apparently, all

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heinous acts and tragic end of these innocent lives has

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due to enforcement of PETA act as wild

animals

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also

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integral part of

these ecosystem

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this ecosystem

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. The slaughtering of

animals

are

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necessarily

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to be prevented from the poachers and other vile mankind

otherwise

, it won’t be a century more when all the

animals

are either endangered or extinct. The severity of these

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isn’t well conveyed among commoners who thinks the money will go up in the smoke for their protection. Personally, I beg to differ from their minds as I totally agree

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the government for investing their revenues for a better cause. All the

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must be sheltered under

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roof.

Hence

, a separate land for the forests must be preserved for the security of these

animals

. In the light of

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facts, the trees will protect the

animals

and they both would help prevent the destruction of

these ecosystem

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this ecosystem

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from the murderous hands of ruthless humans.