In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries, without doubt,
owing
a home compare to Correct your spelling
owning
Use synonyms
rent
one is really important for Change the verb form
renting
people
. Use synonyms
People
have been purchasing houses for a while because of some essential reasons. I will explain the reason of Use synonyms
owing
a Correct your spelling
owning
house
is important and positive.
Use synonyms
Primary
reason is assurance.It is a huge responsibility to pay the Add an article
The primary
rent
every month. Use synonyms
People
might Use synonyms
can’t
pay it on Remove a modal verb
apply
it’s
time or it is possible to Replace the word
its
having
problems with their Change the verb
have
house
owner as a consequence of these they can be homeless. Having their own home is assurance and safety for Use synonyms
poeple
.They can not be removed from their own Correct your spelling
people
house
or they don’t have to think about paying the Use synonyms
rent
every month. Use synonyms
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Second
prominent reason is that Add an article
The second
people
might want to own a Use synonyms
house
to bequeath to their children. Many parents believe that Use synonyms
lefting
a property for their children has a significant Correct your spelling
lifting
letting
importnace
to children can live Correct your spelling
importance
better
life without Add an article
a better
concerning
about money. To give an example my parents wanted to purchase a Change the form of the verb
concern
house
. Reasons Use synonyms
of
that were to ensure us a better future and to get rid of Change preposition
for
necessity
of paying Add an article
the necessity
rent
every month.Now the weight of payment of the Use synonyms
rent
lifted off from my father’s shoulders. Use synonyms
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Furthermore
my little brother and I won’t have to get stress about Add a comma
,Furthermore
accomodation
.
In my Correct your spelling
accommodation
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
people
Use synonyms
owing
houses is a positive situation. Correct your spelling
owning
First
of Linking Words
all
it is a guarantee for Add a comma
,all
poeple
. Correct your spelling
people
Linking Words
Secondly
they can do whatever they want to do with the place Add a comma
,Secondly
such
as changing the layout of Linking Words
interior
place. Add an article
the interior
For
Linking Words
example
my ant wanted to close her Add a comma
,example
house
’s balconies with glass but she couldn’t do it because it was not allowed. After she bought her own place one of the Use synonyms
first
things that she did was closing the balconies with glass.
In conclusion for Linking Words
poeple
Correct your spelling
people
owing
a home is momentous because of plenty reasons. Correct your spelling
owning
This
is a positive chase because it gives you the freedom of doing everything with your own Linking Words
house
.Use synonyms
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