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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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Today technologies enable us to read
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 on electronic devices and what’s more, we can store hundreds of thousands of
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 on devices like Amazon’s Kindle e-reader.
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 makes some
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 believe that
people
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 will stop printing
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 and in the future, everything will be digitalized. Electronic
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 and
newspapers
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 have many advantages. They are easy to use and reach. They can be stored in computers, mobiles, e-readers and in the cloud in huge amounts and are available at any time. The cost of manufacturing and printing is completely removed, which reduced their price. Digital
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 and
newspapers
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also
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 have one very important advantage – they are environmentally friendly. No paper is used to print
magazines
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 and
books
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, which means fewer trees are cut from our forests to produce papers. All of these factors convinced many
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 that digital versions of
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 and
magazines
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 more convenient, ethical and cheaper choice.
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, traditional printed
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 and
magazines
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 have existed for centuries and I believe they have created some kind of emotional connection and
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 for
people
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. When a man reads a book and he likes it, he most probably would like to have it in a form of a tangible thing.
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 are a form of art, like statues and paintings. You can have a picture of some famous painting, but the painting itself has some intangible
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.
Magazines
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 do not have
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value
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 in themselves. Based on
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, I believe that the number of
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 printed will decrease considerably and maybe even dramatically,
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, printed, tangible
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 will still be demanded by many
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 as they have some aura and
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in addition
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 to the things that are written inside. I do think, though, that there is big chance
magazines
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 and
newspapers
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 will move into the online world completely.
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 is because they are published in huge numbers daily and weekly and monthly and no one needs them after years. Printing
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 a huge amount of articles will demand additional resources and make them less competitive even in terms of price.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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