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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#country #technology #skills #life
Modernization has a huge impact on the living, as it increases
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convenience while at
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 time traditions are about to the end.I am not completely in the favor of
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 to keep the traditions alive,
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, tradition represents the morals and roots of any civilization. Development is a necessary process for a better and easy lifestyle whilst it
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 not a superior option. Undoubtedly, technology has been given us the best invention
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ever but side effects too, so health has compromised. In
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 times, people used to get involved in physical activities to enjoy their leisure time and that was beneficial to
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 health as well,
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smartphone
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. There is a popular saying "old is gold" that itself refers
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 importance of culture and heritage ,
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 are always after the historical interests and inventions to keep them alive.
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, some traditional practices can never have a replacement, considering
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 system. In old times, students
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 to write and explain the topics which actually developed
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 writing skills as well as learning whereas nowadays in
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 system they don't need to write and the maximum number of students we have who are not able to write clearly on paper. On contrary, we do
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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