These days, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, many
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are being used for testing to develop new
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and test the safety of products. While many people believe that we should stop testing on
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, others still support the need to test
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on
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. In
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sides in detail, before giving my opinion on
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matter. On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation.
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, many
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are not treated properly when being used for
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, causing some of them to die. In some cases, many chimpanzees were kept in cages and were repeatedly subjected to
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as electric shocks, causing animal lovers to request the government to remove the laboratory’s formal consent.
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,
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have emotions like humans and they are man's best friend;
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, they should not be used for inhumane projects.
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, there are many dogs and cats in the
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that are close friends of man, but they are subjected to pain
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as injections leading to side effects. In my opinion,I support testing
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on
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and there are some reasons.
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, human lives are believed to be the most important on
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planet so scientists would have to make sure mankind is safe.
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, drug tests cannot be tested directly on humans because they contain many of the drug's by-products, so they must be tested on
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before testing on humans
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as mice.
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,
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can find cures for new diseases. In some cases, diseases
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as cancer have been found to be able to be controlled by
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after many tests on mice and monkeys.
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, from 2020 to 2021, after many large and small trials on
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, there is a vaccine to prevent the Covid-19 pandemic, which is causing people to worry because of its strong spread. In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on
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for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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