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Many people believe that the government should spend money on the care of the elderly. Others think that this money should be spent on the education of young people. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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Some folk believe that the ministry should spend the money on the care and well-being of older people. But some citizens think that
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 amount should be spent on the education and the future of youngsters. In a perspective, both the arguments are correct. Elder people have a lot of experience and they have lived their whole struggling for their family and living on their own. When a person starts getting old, he/she loses the will to do things for themselves. It is really important for the government to look after the elderly as there are many of them who are responsible for modernized's development and contributed their years of service to society. As present-day's children are considered to be tomorrow's adults, a child's education is as important as any other issue. A young mind should be educated present-day so that he/she can achieve bigger things as they grow up. But, so many kids had no access to studies because of multiple reasons. And the important reason among them is
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 poverty. Financial conditions are considered to be the huge reason for the lower literacy rate. Government should provide necessary conditions for the young public to get access to education so that they can raise up to larger heights and be the reason for the country's growth. Both the older public and younger populations should be able to receive funds from the government. But comparatively, schooling has more preference according to me. As the elder families have many options today like old age homes and even the kids of them can take care of the elderly, a child should be given more importance while giving funds.
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