You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning a holiday to Australia. You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel's facilities. Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in order to request

further

information about your hotel and its amenities for the customers. As I have heard about the hotel and its reputation, I have been assured to book a room ,

therefore

, I need to know what kinds of rooms you have

along with

other facilities.

First,

I would like to know if you have any single room available for three nights on the 25th of April and its price per night.

Also

, I would like to be sure whether you organise daily trips to different locations or not and if possible, please send me a catalogue including extra information regarding my temporary residency in that hotel. One thing which is worth mentioning is the availability of the Internet

due to

my online classes every single night. Thank you for considering my letter and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ebrahimi Keyhan

Submitted by keyhan454 on Sun Apr 21 2024

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Task Achievement

Consider expanding your inquiry to provide more specific details about your preferences or requirements for the room and day trips. This will make your letter more personalized and clear.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to use a variety of sentence structures and connective words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.

Logical Structure

You have clearly structured your letter, making your requests and inquiries easy to follow.

Writing Tone

Your tone is polite and appropriate for the context of writing to a hotel for information, showing good task achievement.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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