Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that when
parents
are at work, close relations provide the best care
to young children
, while others believe daycare centres
offer a better option. While relatives can usually be trusted to take care
of youngsters properly, this
essay
argues that childcare professionals are better equipped to care
for young children
due to the training they receive.
Many parents
in full-time employment prefer to leave their young ones with grandparents or siblings when they are at work because they trust them more. This
is because they feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family. For example
, working mothers in South Africa often ask their parents
to take care
of their children
because childcare centres
have a high turnover rate, which means there are too many new staff members that the parents
do not know very well. However
, this
essay
argues that a family connection does not guarantee that a person can take care
of young children
well.
Others say that daycare centres
are a better option due to the fact that their employees are skilled professionals. Many of those employed in these centres
have been rigorously trained in how to nurture children
’s growth. For instance
, most childcare centres
in developed countries require their employees to have completed certificates in early childhood development. For this
reason, this
essay
believes that the children
left in the care
of these centres
are better looked after.
In conclusion, although
some parents
may prefer the bond of trust inherent within a family when choosing a caregiver for their children
, this
essay
finds that children
are better off under the care
of daycare centres
due to their staff’s professional training and experience.Submitted by deepsingh.deepu on
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