You read a magazine article about some coffee chains that were reluctant to use the recyclable mugs. This practice is not environmental friendly and you want to bring awareness among people and pressure these companies to be more responsible. Write a letter to newspaper editor and express your concerns. In your letter • present some facts (from your imagination, it means) • say about how the environment is impacted • offeryoursuggestion

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to show my concern related to an article published in the editorial column of 'Times' newspaper regarding use of unrecyclable mugs at some coffee chains which made my write
this
letter. At the onset, I have estimated that per year these chains are
dicomposing
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decomposing
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about 4
billions
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of
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cups and plates which
is
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hazardeous
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hazardous
to our earth as it will take
numbers
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of years to recycle and
its
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just filling the landfills areas.
Furthermore
, today's generation already suffering
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change and water pollution with the increased number of wastes will give no space to dumping the wastes in
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landfill which will be an alarming issue.
Therefore
, I would like to give two solutions to save our nature:
first
, enforcing them to use recyclable mugs and plates and other, by imposing tax and fines to stop it.
Hence
, I request you to re-publish
this
article with the ways of protecting
environment
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. I solicit your cooperation and wait for your revert.My coordinate is (78) 6544789, and
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id [email protected]. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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