You read a magazine article about some coffee chains that were reluctant to use the recyclable mugs. This practice is not environmental friendly and you want to bring awareness among people and pressure these companies to be more responsible. Write a letter to newspaper editor and express your concerns. In your letter • present some facts (from your imagination, it means) • say about how the environment is impacted • offeryoursuggestion

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to show my concern related to an article published in the editorial column of 'Times' newspaper regarding use of unrecyclable mugs at some coffee chains which made my write

this

letter. At the onset, I have estimated that per year these chains are

dicomposing

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decomposing

composing

about 4

billions

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apply

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cups and plates which

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hazardeous

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hazardous

to our earth as it will take

numbers

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of years to recycle and

its

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just filling the landfills areas.

Furthermore

, today's generation already suffering

climate

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change and water pollution with the increased number of wastes will give no space to dumping the wastes in

desired

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landfill which will be an alarming issue.

Therefore

, I would like to give two solutions to save our nature:

first

, enforcing them to use recyclable mugs and plates and other, by imposing tax and fines to stop it.

Hence

, I request you to re-publish

this

article with the ways of protecting

environment

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. I solicit your cooperation and wait for your revert.My coordinate is (78) 6544789, and

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id [email protected]. Yours faithfully, Nikita.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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180 words

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