Museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not by local people. Why is this so? What could be done to encourage more local visitors? Please include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In recent times, historical
sites
and museums are not frequented by local Use synonyms
residents
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
tourists were broadly interested in visiting Add a comma
,however
Linking Words
this
places. Correct determiner usage
these
This
essay will discuss the possible reasons for Linking Words
this
issue and elucidate the ways of Linking Words
inspiration
local people to visit these Replace the word
inspiring
sites
.
To commence with the reasons, Use synonyms
first
and foremost, Linking Words
residents
are not passionate about museums which located nearby the home and diffidently, people do not have any leisure time in order to visit ancient places. Use synonyms
That is
Linking Words
way
, the local heritage Correct your spelling
why
sites
Use synonyms
losses
their interest and importance, owing to Replace the word
lose
fact
that individuals prefer to visit Add an article
the fact
to
modern and attractive museums. A minority part of Remove the preposition
apply
residents
Use synonyms
do
not Change the verb form
does
spent
their essential time Change the verb form
spend
to
looking for Change preposition
apply
an
Correct article usage
apply
archeological
and old Change the spelling
archaeological
thing
. Fix the agreement mistake
things
For example
, from Linking Words
own
experience, the “A. Kasteyev State Museum of Arts ” which is located in Kyzylorda city do not Correct pronoun usage
my own
visited
Change the verb form
visit
such
as the Linking Words
residents
do not interested in Use synonyms
this
place.
Undoubtedly, every lock has a key, so one possible solution is encouraging the government to pay attention to reconstruct historical places. Linking Words
As a result
, the changing into contemporary form with aesthetic design can attract Linking Words
the
number of visitors. Rearranging historical Correct article usage
a
sites
absorb not only visitors but Use synonyms
also
the local inhabitant. Linking Words
For instance
, in the Turkestan city “Keruen-Saray” is built and “Xoja Ahmad Yassaviy” witnessed the Linking Words
marvelous
development. According to Change the spelling
marvellous
this
process, Linking Words
number
of visitors experienced a sharp increase.
In conclusion, authorities and individuals, both should step forward together in order to gain the local interest back. The historical Change the article
a number
the number
sites
should be visited by local people Use synonyms
such
as they are Linking Words
valuable
sign of history and culture from Add an article
a valuable
the valuable
past
generation.Add an article
the past
a past
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