Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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related to adolescent

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has attracted the public’s attention. Some experts believed that the number of juvenile delinquencies has been significantly increased, while others oppose that the vital reason

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is parental negligence. I partly agree with

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statement thanks to several reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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, the most crucial reason to consider is a legal guardian’s failure to provide a child with necessities.

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, youngsters are likely to perform unethical behaviours since these kids still lack

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critical and emotional maturity, leading to unacceptable actions in society. It is

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to understand that 92% of pupils in educational institutions has been subjected to physical and psychological bullying by their peers, giving an illustration.

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is that these unsupervised children inevitably face interpersonal deficits, particularly in family bonding activities.

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, their parents purchase sophisticated modern devices

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as laptops, tablets, and video games in order to

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youth’s happiness, unfortunately, young people could freely access a wide range of provocative

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in the media, leading them to absorb violent habits.

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, abundant researches show that playing aggressive video games

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as GTA, Mad Max, and Mortal Kombat can increase a person’s offensive though, feelings, and manners both in laboratory settings and in actual life.

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viewpoints seem to have validity on the surface, it cannot be denied that there is

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overlooked aspect. It has been found that

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poverty is the majority of problems leading youths to commit a crime.

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is because juvenile delinquency and drug addiction are more common in areas of high unemployment or in developing countries. Thailand,

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, is one of the highest economic

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in the world,

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, those poor citizens become

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drug dealer. Regarding Bangkok Post’s report, many children

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with drugs since they must help their family generate income. In conclusion, the social

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associated with youngsters is a concerning scenario thanks to child neglect.

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, it is essential that every parent must extol

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of woke-life balance in order to prevent children to commit

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fraud.