Some people say that teachers should be paid according to how their students learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that

teachers

' earnings should depend on the academic performance of their

students

. In my opinion, it would be wrong to tie

teachers

' gainings to

students

' scores. Some people think that it is fair for those who teach

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to earn more.

Teachers

who pay much more time and energy are more likely to teach better

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so that their

students

show higher study efficiency and

thus

lead to higher marks on exams.

Thus

, tutors who pay more

efforts

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deserve to gain more.

However

, it

do

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bring more negative influence.

Firstly

, tutors who get paid

by

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their

students

' literary

behaviors

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often suffer more pressure. They may push the pressure they have on

students

.

For example

, they will ask their

students

to study more and finish more tasks in order to perform better on tests, which may impair

students

' study and life balance and bring harm to mental and physical health.

Secondly

, evaluation oriented by money solely will impair

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of satisfaction. Professionals like

teachers

are valuable for a nation

as

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whose

next

generation

are

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fostered and guided by them. It is important to encourage them to make more

contribution

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in their fields.

Lastly

, it is wrong to value a student only by his

academeic

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academic

performance. We should look more upon

on

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his manner, sports skills,

characters

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and moral quality.

Thus

, we can't value a teacher only by his ability

of teaching

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students

to pass literature tests either. In conclusion, I totally

diagree

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disagree

agree

with the idea that

teachers

' revenues should be based on their

students

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literary performances. More aspects should be concerned and the evaluation system should be more comprehensive.