Q. Social media has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using social media outweigh the advantages?

In recent years,
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social
media
. Some
people
believe that social
media
has
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impact
as it
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communicate
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about social and professional issues, while
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think it has
more
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a more
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negative
impact
as more
people
were wasting their
time
with unproductive different social
media
.
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essay will argue that social
media
enable us to communicate
faster
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and smarter way of
communication
than its drawback of killing productive
time
of youth
people
.
One
commonly cited disadvantage of social
media
is that
people
who engaged in it wasting their precious
time
.
This
is because large numbers of
people
are spending their productive
time
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social
media
as
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addictive habit.
For example
,
one
recent study shows that average spending hours in social
media
has jumped from 2
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to 3
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in
last
year only, which definitely
impact
on
people
’s productivity and creativity. Despite
this
, there are a
number
of significant benefits to using social
media
in professional and social
communication
.
First
of all, it has made
communication
easy by
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huge
opportunity
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opportunities
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by providing easy access for all
people
.
This
helps to send and received
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a message
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message
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messages
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from
one
person to
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number
of
people
.
For instance
,
one
can communicate with whole worlds
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with in
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a
second
through social
media
, which was not possible other than
the
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social
media
.
Furthermore
, through social
media
people
can communicate fast, as
one
message
can display on millions
number
mobile devices instantly.
People
can disseminate any
kinds
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of
message
in their group within a
second
, which makes
communication
fast. Take a Facebook post as an example, if a celebrity post a photo or any
message
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then
large
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number
of followers can get
message
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the message
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instantly. In conclusion,
although
there are drawbacks of
people
are wasting their productive
time
in
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social
media
, it is clear that social
media
has
significant
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role in
communication
whether it is professional or personal. I agree that benefits of the social
media
outweigh the disadvantages.
Submitted by Leena Kapoor on

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