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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
people
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 are having a lot of fitness issues because they are consuming fast foodstuff most of the time. In many countries, the numbers of unhealthy
people
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 are rising significantly and
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 some
people
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 think that the government should implement a higher
tax
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 on
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food
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 category.
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 I agree that the government should increase the expense to reduce the consumption of fast
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, I
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 believe that encouraging the community to eat healthy snacks will be more beneficial for fitness. On one hand, implementing a high amount of
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 on a fast meal will reduce its consumption. The higher the
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, the more expensive it will be to purchase these
food
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 items for the majority of the population.
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, middle and lower class
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 who buy fast
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 most of the time because of cheap rates will start purchasing less frequently. As the majority of the population comes into the middle and lower class category,
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 it will dramatically decrease the use of fast
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.
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, it will benefit the well-being of citizens in the long run.
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, Encouraging
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 regarding healthy snacks will
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 decrease the consumption of fast foodstuff. By educating the community regarding the benefits of eating a balanced diet for a healthy body and mind will change their perception about fast
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.
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, a family can still choose to eat outside just by replacing fast
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 with healthy
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 options.
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,many restaurants have options for delicious salads and freshly cooked meals that are tasty and healthy.
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 way
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 will become aware of their fitness. To conclude, as the population are eating more fast
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 nowadays, the government should impose a higher
tax
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 on these
food
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 items.
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, encouraging society regarding healthy edibles will
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 decrease health problems.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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