Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need explain how you will keep up-to-date while you’re away suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Stika,
As you know every year me and my family travel to Europe for a lot of personal reasons.
For example
, my daughter has to pass the test in her native language and also
we have to visit our doctors and sort out our new passports to extend our visas.
Nevertheless
, I am able to continue with my work
from our European branch on a daily basis and give you my daily results every day.
Here I want you to suggest my solution for how I'll work
during my annual leave. Although
we'll be very busy I am able to work
from our branch every day from 7:00 am to 4pm from Monday till Friday also
because of the time zone I can work
overtime if ll come something very urgent.
I hope Mr Stika that my explanation is enough and if you need more information please don't hesitate to contact me
Thank youSubmitted by andrea.kroupova on
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organization
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language
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content
You've done a great job of addressing all parts of the task, but you might provide a little more detail on how you will keep up-to-date while you're away.
content
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tone
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structure
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The Closing
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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,