Some People think that success is the best measure intelligence, while others believe that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your Opinion.

Nowadays,
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majority of
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society believe that achievement can be countable, and it is dependent on one’s intelligence. Whereas other thinks that it can be measured in different parameters.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, I believe that
decision
taken at
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time and
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approach, my view is justified in the following paragraph.
To begin
with,
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persons will take
right
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decision
at
right
time, to avoid any obstacles and to achieve the result. While every person will be in his
life
based on the way they chose in their
life
.
For example
. MS Dhoni,
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has taken
a
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right
decision
to
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purse
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his career in cricket despite
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having a good job during his early days. His
decision
has made him
to
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be more successful in
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part of his
life
.
Further
, they make
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decision
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based on the situation which will help
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them
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the
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to reduce risk and ultimately they will achieve the result.
Secondly
, one needs to decide the
right
approach based on their skills are important to be considered. It is very essential to understand
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ability they have to achieve anything.
For example
. As per the recent study show by the Time of India, that many
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who
clear
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the UPSC exams had to
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a proper method and they have chosen the main subjects as per
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ability, ultimately it
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them to clear it in
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attempt.
In addition
, people with talent will avoid disturbance in order to achieve their
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. In Conclusion,
Although
success can be calculated based on the achievement,
However
, it can be shown in the
decision
they take and the method to follow to avoid interruption in their
life
.
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