in the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern society thanks to the advancement in technology. There are more and more methods to produce
food
or other products without using animals
, especially wild animals
. In my opinion, I believe that there is no need of using animals
for food
or manufacture products.
The first
argument given to support my opinion is that there is a great evolution of many aspects of society. People are gradually aware of the benefits of eating vegetables
. We should follow some nutrition experts’ advice that eats more vegetables
and reduces meats that provide more nutritious such
as vitamin, even protein which is aware that contain a lot in meat for our health. Furthermore
, most of us want to have good looking with a slim body that the reason why people like to eat vegetables
and fruits than meat. Many fresh ingredients from plants are played an essential role in a healthy diet for everyone.
In manufacturing, advanced technology allows us to produce many goods such
as clothes, shoes, medicines and so on without using materials
from animals
. We can use
natural materials
like wool or man-made materials
like cotton, silicon and so on. Another reason for using other materials
which are alternatives for animals
that to protect the animals
' safety. Although
the government has imposed a tricky ban on wild animals
hunting, whereas the number of animals
which is hunted improperly is increasing day by day because of people demands on eating and use
for medication. Whilst they can use
medicine from plants
In conclusion, I entirely agree that there is no need of using animals
for food
or other products. We completely can use
other things like vegetables
or many other materials
to alter animals
in the manufacture and consume food
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