There are more workers who work from home and more students who study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, the advancement of online
technology
enables people
to work and study remotely via a computer's screen. As being easier to access, cheaper cost, and during Covid-19 pandemic, work from home
and study online become main methods for continuing living during this
adversity. In my opinion, the beneficial aspect of technology
outnumbers the adverse effect as follows.
The first
advantage of technology
development is having more time
with family. Nowadays, most people
can work everywhere and every time
without leaving their homes. For example
, they can make a conference dealing a project worth 1 million dollars via Zoom application, simultaneously staying at home
, and taking care of their children. Therefore
, they can spend quality time
with pupils, which make the relationship getting closer.
the development of technology
not only provides more time
with beloved people
but, also
helps people
save a huge amount of money. As they do not have to leave their home
, the cost of fuel and meals will be cut. Indeed, individuals do not need to buy new clothes when staying at home
because they do not have to meet their colleagues and boss, which the Zoom application enables the user to change the background, and also
the uniform. As a result
, people
will have more savings money by cutting the necessary payment.
In conclusion, the online invention allows people
to have more time
spending with family, and to have more money in a bank because people
do not need to leave their home
, and beloved family so I strongly support that the development of technology
is beneficial for mankind.Submitted by prokoh_ja_555 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite