Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?
Historical
buildings
are the asset of a nation and so governments try to preserve such
buildings
. However
, many people consider them a hindrance to prosperity and want them to be demolished. Nevertheless
, they must be conserved as they are a part of heritage
and commemorate crucial past events Add an article
the heritage
happened
there. Correct pronoun usage
that happened
Also
, these ancient monuments are actually a way to prosperity and do not hinder it.
To start with, historical buildings
have been associated with the heritage of a nation. This
is because they are mostly related to a particular past event. Therefore
, such
buildings
help to aware the future generation about the history
; about which nowadays they are reluctant to attain any knowledge. For example
, Minar-e-Pakistan at Iqbal park
in Lahore commemorates the day of Pakistan resolution on which Change the capitalization
Park
foundation
for Correct article usage
the foundation
new
homeland was laid down by Muslims, people still go there with their children and tell them about the importance of the day. Add an article
the new
Hence
, these historical architects keep the history
alive.
However
, history
has never been an obstacle in the way to progress. In fact, it is a source of prosperity. As of, old monuments attract the attention of tourists because of their antique designs and background. Therefore
, they boost the economy
of a country. In addition
, to make them more eye catching
, authorities mostly tend to construct some new exquisite sites like parks and hotels around Add a hyphen
eye-catching
such
monuments so that more people pay a visit there. To illustrate, Taj
Mahal in India has always been the place of tourists attraction and had never failed to uplift the Correct article usage
the Taj
economy
of the country and construction
of a Correct article usage
the construction
five star
hotel has added to the Add a hyphen
five-star
economy
as myriad
of tourists Add an article
a myriad
the myriad
stay
there during their tour. Change the verb form
stays
Hence
, they play a great role in financially strengthening a country.
In conclusion, historical
Add an article
the historical
a historical
architect
must be reserved and renovated in order to revive the Fix the agreement mistake
architects
history
among the young generation. Also
, they have always been a booster of economy
by the way of tourism Add an article
the economy
not
an obstacle.Add the comma(s)
,not
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