Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money ? What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Nowadays, many believe that having wealth is a major reason why
people
can feel joy while others believe they can be satisfied without having much cash. Personally, I agree with the latter opinion as there are other aspects of life that can also
make us cheerful such
as having social interactions and having control over our reactions towards unfortunate situations. This
essay will extensively discuss how the aforementioned ideas play a role in making many people
smile.
To begin
with, humans are a
social Correct article usage
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being
by nature who have the physical ability to feel joy when interacting with other humans. Fix the agreement mistake
beings
This
means that people
are born to have relationships with others. Moreover
, anatomically speaking, by talking to other people
and developing relationships, the human brain releases hormones, such
as dopamine and serotonin, which are claimed to be induce
happiness. In fact, a journal from Cambridge Psychology in 1995 has proven the claim to be true after observing the subjects' dopamine levels before and after being placed in a group scenario. Change the verb form
induce
Hence
, from the scientific point of view, social interaction is indeed a factor that induces contentment.
Furthermore
, how individuals control their reactions to undesirable events in life, helps in determining how satisfied they are feeling. Moreover
, there are practices, like anger management therapies or meditations, that the public adopt
in order to equip themselves with a better outlook to ill-fated Change the verb form
adopts
occassions
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occasions
For instance
, when having a bad day at work and feeling extremely upset, I prefer to sit down and take a few deep breaths as
an effort to calm myself down. By being determined to not feel any more distressed for the rest of the day, I have managed to feel happier. Change preposition
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Thus
, when one chooses to have a positive mind instead
of being pessimistic, we are able to think clearly and find contentment in any situation.
In conclusion, a majority of the population may firmly believe that satisfaction comes from having abundance
of money. Add an article
an abundance
Although
it might be true to an extend
, I believe money does not hold the biggest impact on one's cheerfulness. As proven by the explanation above, being able to bond with others and Replace the word
extent
having
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have
a
better management of our minds and actions have shown to be effectively making Remove the article
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people
smile too.Submitted by florencia.frederica on
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