Your friend delivered a baby girl. Congratulate her on this good news and write how you feel. In your letter, explain your situation about your inability to come and see her in person. In your letter • say how happy you are on this news • explain your situation that you could not attend this important occasion • what gifts you have bought for her

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Dear Paula, It was

such

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a happy news

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happy news

a piece of happy news

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about the arrival of

new

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a new

the new

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baby

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the

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apply

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Rai's family.Yesterday, Roob called me and broke

this

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news over the phone that made me write

this

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letter to you. I'm so pleased to hear about

this

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news; I hope by the time you'll receive

this

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letter you've recovered from all the delivery pains and

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are in

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pink again.

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, your

baby

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must have got a name too.

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, I really apologise for not attending

this

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vital occasion but

last

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week my manager had been being given me a new task which was important

for

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from

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the point of view of my appraisals which made me miss

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event. I hope you understand

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apply

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. At

last

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, I'm coming

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week to meet you and the infant. I am so

exicted

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excited

to tell you that I have already bought some gifts

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soft toys, attires for the

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newborn

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new born

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newborn

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baby

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. Please send me snaps of your

baby

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apply

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me on

whats

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what's

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app. I'm just a call away, do let me know if you need

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anything

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any thing

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anything

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Yours

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Your

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friend, Nikita.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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