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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Learning
history
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 need not be restricted to only understanding civilizations or ancient culture. These days
people
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 of some countries are inclined towards understanding the
history
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 of their homes and buildings that they reside in.
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 essay would be elaborating more on the reasons for the rise in
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 interest area and the sources from which
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 could obtain more
information
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 related to
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history
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 of a building.
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, understanding the
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 of a building would help in gathering
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 on how old the building is or what materials were used in the construction, thereby helping
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 to understand the durability of the building.
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, since
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 put in a lot of their savings while buying a home,
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 would help them in gauging if buying a property would be sustainable in the future.
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, another factor for the interest in
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 could be due to the increasing rate of crime and paranormal activities across the globe due to which
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 are being more cautious under
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 circumstances. There are numerous sources available to help out in researching the
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 of a place.
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 there are many documentaries and articles available online, it would be more insightful to get in touch with the local population to obtain
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 related to the area. Since the local
people
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 would have been residing in the neighbouring areas for a longer time, they would be aware of any abnormal activities that
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 happened in the past. To know more about the building composition, one could always reach out to the civil engineers or construction workers in the area. To conclude, I believe that the easy access to any
information
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 online has resulted in
people
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 being more cautious and aware of the events happening across the world which has led to the rise in interest and research in minute details
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 as the
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 of a place for which more accurate
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 could be obtained from local sources rather than relying on online
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.
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