An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Lena, I am so excited to hear that you want to come to Minsk for your holiday. Haven’t seen you for a while. Since your vacation will be in July, I would recommend you to find an apartment in advance, because as a rule in the summer months we have a lot of tourists. If you wish I can ask my acquaintance, who is a real estate agent if he has some available apartment for

this

period.

Otherwise

, you can look for something at Airbnb. By the way, summer is a perfect time to visit Minsk. There are a lot of outdoor activities organized

such

as street food festivals, open-air concerts.

Moreover

, the weather is pleasant for sightseeing, it is not boiling hot here in the summer, you can even take some warmer clothes like jeans and a hoodie in case of rainy days. Let me know if you need any help! Regards, Olga

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