Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others believe that scientists are more influential. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.

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been a lot of discussion about the influential personalities of the world. Some people argue that
politicians
are influential at the same same time, few others opine
this
and adding that
scientists
are influential. In my opinion,
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scientists
are more influential than
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politicians
because without scientific inventions the
politicians
cannot make any developments
to
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the
nation
.
Firstly
, a country is recognised
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globally through
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development, and the developments are possible with scientific contributions to the
nation
.
Moreover
, all the facilities
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humans
enjoys
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today is because of
scientists
like electricity, vehicles and the internet
also
.
In addition
, the recent achievement of
scientists
are
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the vaccines for corona. To summarize, because of
scientists
and their inventions the people
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making their life easier and safe.
Secondly
,
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politicians
are
also
important for serving the people.
However
, they have managing capabilities but, without the help of
scientists
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they cannot reach their goal.
For example
, during
this
pandemic
situation
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all the leaders from throughout the world struggled to have control over the situation but they failed till the invention of vaccination. Apart from
this
,
although
the
politicians
are serving the
nation
but
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, the real protection for the country had been invented by the
scientists
in the form of weapons likes atomic weapons.
Finally
, even though both
politicians
and
scientists
have their own roles to play for the
nation
, the
scientists
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roles outweigh the
politicians
. So, in my viewpoint,
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scientists
are more influential in the world.
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