Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others believe that scientists are more influential. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.

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been a lot of discussion about the influential personalities of the world. Some people argue that

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are influential at the same same time, few others opine

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and adding that

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are influential. In my opinion,

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scientists

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are more influential than

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politicians

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because without scientific inventions the

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cannot make any developments

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the

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, a country is recognised

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globally through

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development, and the developments are possible with scientific contributions to the

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, all the facilities

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humans

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today is because of

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like electricity, vehicles and the internet

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, the recent achievement of

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the vaccines for corona. To summarize, because of

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and their inventions the people

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making their life easier and safe.

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politicians

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are

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important for serving the people.

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, they have managing capabilities but, without the help of

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they cannot reach their goal.

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all the leaders from throughout the world struggled to have control over the situation but they failed till the invention of vaccination. Apart from

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,

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the

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are serving the

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, the real protection for the country had been invented by the

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in the form of weapons likes atomic weapons.

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, even though both

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and

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have their own roles to play for the

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roles outweigh the

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. So, in my viewpoint,

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scientists

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are more influential in the world.