Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undeniable that nations are becoming more similar
with
each other due to Change preposition
to
people
from all over the world tend to purchase the same products
. I consider that it to be a very negative trend.
Because of industrialization and global trade, many traditions have disappeared. Global advertising encourages everyone to buy the same products
. Clothes are mass produced
in standard sizes. Add a hyphen
mass-produced
People
wear similar clothes, rather than traditional costumes. Jeans and T-shirts, for instance
, are now worn throughout the world. Moreover
, the appearance of each cities
Change to a singular noun
city
is gradually seem
to be Change the verb form
gradually seems
same
, which are all covered by high-rise buildings and skyscrapers. Modern concrete, steel and glass buildings are built in only weeks or months. Correct article usage
the same
By contrast
, historic buildings took craftsmen years to build. As a result
, there are fewer people
who can create hand-made goods accompanying the disappearance of our own culture. Therefore
, it is important for countries to maintain our
different cultural identities.
Correct pronoun usage
their
This
also
has a negative effect on work and economic aspect
. Most Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
products
are similar because they are now made in factories. It is difficult for machines to create special goods that different from others. They are only able to produced
the same Change the verb
produce
products
. Machinery has replaced skilled human labour led to more amount of unemployment, meaning that there are more people
likely to depend on payment by the state. This
brings more burdens to government
and Correct article usage
the government
Correct your spelling
taxpayers
tax payers
, Correct your spelling
taxpayers
also
causes the gap between rich and pool. It is harmful for
the Change the preposition
to
economic
of a country.
In short, Replace the word
economy
people
who buy the
similar Correct article usage
apply
products
has many detrimental effects on both countries and cultures.Submitted by niuyuan65 on
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