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In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Criminal
trials
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 are public in most countries, some countries exacerbate people
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 to them showing them on national television. They represent a particularly intense entertainment for
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 and could be in some cases not adequate for all
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ages groups, they represent an additional way to show violence on public television and diffuse hate.
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, they could
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 show children and adolescents the consequences of committing any action
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 against the law. While justice, should operate in a public manner to both ensure that the right punishment is given and protect the
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imputation
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 from any abuse from
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judges and jury; we should protect the
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imputation
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 privacy. Showing
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 on television could
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 be dangerous for criminals' incolumity exposing their identity and to repercussion from the general public; the lack of privacy does not only could influence the imputate' s life, but
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 that of his family.
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, public criminal
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 could serve as an example to encourage especially young
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people
 to avoid breaking the law and in general discourage wrong-doing. Mass media are an often
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 education medium, watching a trial and
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 a fine being allocated to someone for breaking the speed limit could be helpful for adolescents approaching to drive alone for the
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 time and tempted by more "exciting" ways of driving.
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 the timings at which more sensitive topics,
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 rape, violence and murders, are transmitted should be carefully studied to avoid children to watch them or at least to ensure that they do so under adult supervision. In conclusion, the advantages of showing criminal
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 on
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television
 outweigh the disadvantages if the
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 and timings of the show are carefully selected.
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