Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only. others however feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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number of

people

consider that

the

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mobile

phones

ought to be used for personal work,while others support the idea of using mobile

phones

for some informative purpose.

however

, in my

opinion

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i

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believe that

such

phones

intend to

use

for private

purpose

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purposes

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.

To begin

with, from the

last

two decades mobile

phones

have become

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immensely

immensly

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popular gadget among

people

. Due to its benefits, it is owned by each group of

people

. For illustration, apart from calling

to

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someone, cell

phones

is

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largely used to save data, text, pictures, and sending emails as well. Not only

this

but mobile

also

enable one to get socialized and exchange ideas among

people

.

In addition

, it empowers

elderly

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population to get a word with their loved ones who are not around them.

On the other hand

,

masses

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the masses

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believe

this

modern form of communication should restrict its

use

to office work. As mentioned above

this

modern form of communication could be used for

variety

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of operations,

however

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this

could lead to

distract

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one's concentration from his work.

Besides

this

, excess

use

of

such

gadgets

create

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creates

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a gap between society and

oneslf

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oneself

, which is

in the long run

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harmful for one's

psychology

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psychological

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state. In the conclusion, benefits of using

phones

for

private

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the private

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task

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tasks

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are overpowered

the

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otherside

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other side

.

i

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I

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support that

over

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overuse

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use

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the use

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of anything is harmful, as per

this

we should balance the

use

of mobile

phones

,

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so that we can avail the positive aspects of these gadgets.