In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can the people research this?

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houses
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, when you decided to build
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house you think about design ,space, rooms or other parts.
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aware life, they want to know about
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or history of their space
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because in their belief,
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people
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the energy of space.
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to past and the best way
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get
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information is talk to elder
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historical book and
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documentary
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to old men or women
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true information about our living place and our home , because we spend more time in different
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our house ,we should know about the past and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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