There are more people to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is positive or negative?

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is a highlyhotly debated topic
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of many
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when it comes to its pros and cons. The following essay will take a look at both sides of the argument.
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that why
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is widely been used by many
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its many flaws.
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, let us take a look at the positive side of automation and its increasing demand in daily
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errands. As per
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’s convenience and their particular choices towards their job or study necessities, mechanization like
computers
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are easy to go objects when it comes to lengthy and difficult tasks benefiting along with their cheaper price and wide availability enhances the spark of its use. In
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intricate time of pandemic where going out seems to be a challenging task,
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tend to spend more time staying behind their doors and are dealing with their
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by relying more on their
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in order to achieve their desired work goals. The
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who again
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going through the same threat of virus, are
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benefiting from
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advancement of
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on a crucial level
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lockdown seems a big no to educational institutes to accomplish all the study tasks.
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is the time where automation like
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exists to be a real
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life saver
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. Students are effortlessly entertained by their teacher all easily by sitting in their comfy couches without fear of catching
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it is found that educational institutes are now introducing
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for all students so that they can easily get to know about the
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and its usage which would help them in future .
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when
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the discussion
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is about positive points of one thing there are always negative points
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extensive use of computer screens all
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long, it will directly affect the physical activity of
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of
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generation.
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seem to be less social, more lazy becoming couch bugs with each passing
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is turning out to be really fatal for general health. Lower
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among youngsters due to no social interaction is
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one of the negative
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of
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.
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, Famous Psychologist concluded in his new research that children who are socially active exhibit higher
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whereas children who are more exposed to screens are showing low
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and higher peer pressure. To sum up, weighing both sides of
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the positive side of computer usage weighs high because of its exceptional features making
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and work
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easier
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by
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, which clearly fades out its negative aspects

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommuting
  • remote work
  • digital communication
  • flexibility
  • productivity
  • work-life balance
  • accessibility
  • cost-effective
  • online learning
  • virtual classroom
  • digital skills
  • job market
  • commitment
  • isolation
  • distraction
  • self-discipline
  • home office
  • collaboration tools
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