Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

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It is thought by some that the advertisement displayed
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televisions
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help those who
watches
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it, while others do not agree
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their view. In my opinion, not all ads
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helpful, some
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purely for commercial purposes only, while there
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few generated in
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interest.
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with, most of the commercials
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solely for marketing. Neither these
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helpful nor they
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true.
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those commercials
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intended to sell their products, what they sell
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not the products but the desire to possess them.
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, when an ad
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iPhone
iphone
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an iphone
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is displayed, it not only showcases the latest features and advantages
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but
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provokes a person who might have a good phone to purchase another one.
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advertisements do not help anyone,
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increases unnecessary expenses.
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to that, not all
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advertised is true. There
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several products in the market that claim many advantages for
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end users,
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however
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none of them
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are
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truthful.
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, there
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many hair-care items
which
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states
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that it would result in the growth of long and healthy hair, yet not even a single buyer could achieve any result. Most of these commercials
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fake and
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displayed only for publicity.
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, there
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few adverts that
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for public awareness, these
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very helpful for its viewers. Many governments publish
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advertisements to help
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nation overcome certain public issues like keeping the city clean, smoking etc.
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, some ads related to improving women’s menstrual hygiene is
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advertised that help people in the rural areas to become more aware and take necessary precautions. In conclusion, not all ads
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generated in the interest of
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viewers while most of
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is for marketing and promoting their items, some
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for increasing public awareness as well.
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