In some areas of the US, curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In some parts of the US, children are not allowed to be out without their parents after a certain time,

although

it might seem unfair, in my opinion depending on the situation it might be a good decision. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain more. For one thing, since in some places especially in run-towns the crime standard has reached an alarming

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, and in some ,occasions violence amount among the youth is higher than normal in comparison with similar areas,

therefore

, authorities have to impose some restrictions to prevent doing more offences.

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, most crimes have happened at night, when the streets are out of people and criminals have a great opportunity to commit a crime, and if adolescents are exposed to these circumstances, they would probably be affected by the case, which may influence their behaviour and attitude. For another thing, owing to being

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by so-called peer pressure at

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age young people can be influenced by their friends easily, and commit unwanted actions like burglary or vandalism,

therefore

, teenagers who

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by their adults may be less affected by their peers, and it is less likely to do something wrong or dangerous. In another word, in ,

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should monitor their offspring all the time,

in particular

at night because according to recent researches the crime rate is high at

this

time. In conclusion, we can deny the fact that curfew is imposed in places, where the risk is high, from my standpoint provided that it could tackle

this

issue, it would be a great opinion.