In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Getting bachelors
degree
in the university is one of the
students
' goals. Nowadays, there are more
students
study in foreign
countries
than in their own
countries
.
This
essay will discuss
pros
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the pros
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and cons of getting a
degree
in different
countries
. Studying abroad can bring many benefits and opportunities to
students
.
Firstly
, living in unfamiliar places and doing things alone without parents could develop
students
' confidence.
For instance
, when
students
have
struggles
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struggled
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with their studies, they have to find their own ways to achieve it and after
the
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apply
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success
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they will definitely being proud of themselves and getting more
confidences
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confidence
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.
Secondly
, being in foreign
countries
lets
students
be able to get out of their comfort zones and meet new people. These will lead to many opportunities
especially
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for jobs. There
are
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some research
show
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that most people can find jobs from the recommendation of their weak ties relationships.
In contrast
, getting a
degree
abroad might lead to problems. Studying there alone probably get
students
a
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homesick which might lead to mental health problems.
Moreover
, financial issue is
also
one of the drawbacks. Comparing to study in
students
'
countries
, studying abroad use much more money.
Hence
, some
students
who cannot afford
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it by
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themselves have to lend money from their families, relatives or friends.
This
situation might affect their relationships. In conclusion,
todays
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today
, there are more opportunities to study and get a university
degree
abroad than in the past.
Although
gaining confidence and meeting new people are the advantages,
students
still have to concern about the probability of mental health issues and financial problems.
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