some people think money is tge best gift to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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As we all know the giving
gift
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is a part of individual tradition until now but most
people
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having a dilemma of choosing presents especially to the teenagers despite others claiming cash is the best.
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essay will discuss both sides and
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my
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if I will give the best gifts to youngsters I will offer something
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more useful and memorable
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this
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, most
people
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nowadays finding difficulties in choosing the
gift
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to offer because young
people
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nowadays are having a number of choices in life. Even though, I will still choose to have a
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that is
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unforgettable and useful to them every day.
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, my sister was celebrated her debut
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year and
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her phone was broken at that time, so
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I did
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of giving her money I sent her a brand new phone as a birthday
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and I’m glad that she likes it. So, money is not the precious
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of all. In contrary to
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, others said that its better if the money to be given.
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case depends upon the situation because some
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are busy and they do not have time to look for a
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.
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, they will give the cash as a present because it a hassle-free but most of the time now parents are like that. There is a chance that if you give hard cash to the young
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or to your children there is a possibility they will spend in the wrong way.
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, they will ask more and they do not understand what’s the value of it. To conclude, despite other
people
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saying monetary is the greatest thing,
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I believe the finest
gift
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you can give those worth remembering and for lifetime value.
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