some people think money is tge best gift to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As we all know the giving
gift
is a part of individual tradition until now but most
people
having a dilemma of choosing presents especially to the teenagers despite others claiming cash is the best.
This
essay will discuss both sides and
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my
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if I will give the best gifts to youngsters I will offer something
that is
more useful and memorable
one
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.
To begin
this
, most
people
nowadays finding difficulties in choosing the
gift
to offer because young
people
nowadays are having a number of choices in life. Even though, I will still choose to have a
gift
that is
unforgettable and useful to them every day.
For example
, my sister was celebrated her debut
last
year and
then
her phone was broken at that time, so
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I did
instead
of giving her money I sent her a brand new phone as a birthday
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and I’m glad that she likes it. So, money is not the precious
gift
of all. In contrary to
this
, others said that its better if the money to be given.
This
case depends upon the situation because some
people
are busy and they do not have time to look for a
gift
.
For instance
, they will give the cash as a present because it a hassle-free but most of the time now parents are like that. There is a chance that if you give hard cash to the young
people
or to your children there is a possibility they will spend in the wrong way.
As a result
, they will ask more and they do not understand what’s the value of it. To conclude, despite other
people
saying monetary is the greatest thing,
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I believe the finest
gift
you can give those worth remembering and for lifetime value.
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